daredevil muffin-y genius ([info]monanotlisa) wrote,
@ 2005-12-15 14:33:00
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Entry tags:ats, btvs, fanfic, fanfic ats, rl, sga, vm

Many Notes (And A Ficlet)
Have just taken ten cubic metres or so of paper to the recycling bin, first at home, then in the office -- been going through my old study notes taken during years and years of lectures, university courses, and repetition classes, basically. Kept only very, very few of them. Je ne regrette rien (with regards to the throwing away spree, anyway).


Anyway, the part at home was done while letting Veronica Mars -- thanks, [info]kskitten! -- run in the background. And whoo, boy, I have a few questions re: VM 2x09 & VM 2x10:

- On my way from the shelves to the paper basket, I kept slipping and sliding -- where did all the soap come from? A(n) (ex-)girlfriend in a coma, suddenly pregnant, dying and leaving the child in the arms of our intrepid heroes: What? How? WHAT?

- Can Duncan please stop making me bite my nails by being honest about, say, everything, and put his cards depicting Kendall on the table, too?

- Can Logan and Weevil be any more slashy in their manly-man ways of hating each other yet fighting crime together?

- Does Sheriff Lamb re-define the term "vanity", or what? (And -- does he really work on a six-pack there?)

- Isn't geek love where both parties are lusting after money and personal success just the cutest?

- Why does Rob Thomas foil my plans to write Veronica/Meg like that? *sniff*

- Where did that Leo-As-The-Tearjerking-Saviour-Of-His-Little-Sister thing come from?

- Could Logan have been any stranger and stupider with the videos there?

- Did you miss Wallace as much as I did? (Did Veronica?)






Also, [info]eretria -- yesterday night, I managed to watch SGA 1x14, Grace Under Pressure -- and already spammed at least one friend's LJ with my instant reactions. Real quick, for I must run:

- OMG, John is SO saving his boyfriend! I loved that there was not the shadow of a doubt in him that they would do it -- I remember reading the word "denial" somewhere, but seriously, I think Sheppard's just the definition of determined here: He doesn't let himself imagine that the mission to save his boyfriend Rodney could fail.

- Speaking of love, Elizabeth? Feels something for our Dr. McKay herself. That amount of energy, manpower, sheer force of will -- whoa. I mean, she is an emphatic leader, but this effort, both the quality and quantity? Plus, excellent leadership here; her scene in the control room, convincing Radek? Fantastic.

- Obviously, David Hewlett as Rodney McKay wins the gold medal in this episode, but I really, really loved the Zelenka moments -- that he's not a born hero but so very human, that he wants to help his colleague and friend but has doubts, is uncertain, wishes desperately to avoid danger, and lethal one at that. Just brilliant.

- As for plot, if certainly not characterisation, I wasn't thrilled, though. Not to harsh anyone's buzz, but hallucinations that take the form of a love interest and keep chatting with you, lucidly so, saving your butt in the process? Thanks, but no thanks. Just to be clear: I liked Sam-the-person, actually; hadn't ever seen her on-screen before, so if she comes to Atlantis in person -- yes, I'd love to watch her and Rodney. Still, the storyline and its execution just bothered me -- a twin!Rodney, a shadow half, a mirror self I could've done with, barely, but this just reeked of overly fantastic sci-fi to me, a cheap attempt to shove in a guest star, an artificial way of bringing about introspection (which, in and by itself, was v. cool again).






Edited to add:

BtVS and AtS folks? If you're interested, I wrote a three-minute birthday gift for [info]viciouswishes -- one of her favourite couples starring in a tiny post-NFA ficlet




When he opens his eyes, there's numb, silky darkness, and a lance of fear shoots through him, bright and sharp and piercing --

"Hey, you're awake. Excuse me…" A click, and he has to squeeze his eyes shut again against the sudden influx of light; for a moment, that's all he sees. For a heartbeat.

"I'm not --" He swallows. "I'm still alive."

The voice next to his head is young, but the tint of weariness belongs to a much older person.

"Yeah. It was touch and go for a while, but the doctors pulled through." He can hear her soft exhalation of relief. "Must've had something to do with Spike growling at them whenever they stopped working on you, and with Anne coaxing the ICU nurses to check on you, like, every other minute."

"She here?"

"No, she took an earlier turn, as did Spike. Stayed with you throughout surgery, though." A deep breath. "Angel sent her home when you were stable by reminding her of the kids; after the riots, they'd need her help, too."

Riots, of course. Gotta love the L.A. administration that way; never gets old as a cover-up excuse. He opens his eyes, blinks slowly, focuses on the girl in the cheap plastic chair next to his bedside. Petite and pretty, eyes too large and the shadows under them too deep.

"Buffy."

She looks at him questioningly. "Yes?"

"No, I mean --" His head is still fuzzy, traces of the anaesthetic, which also explains the numbness. "I mean, you're Buffy. Angel's ex."

He sees the expression in her face and hears himself asking, "Or, not-so-ex now that you've gone all cavalry on our asses and returned?"

At that, she actually smiles, a bright smile that crinkles her nose. "No, but that's a long story." A tiny frown. "One that involves really, really bad metaphors."

He grins back at her. "Not like I don't have time now."

Another answering smile, surprised, full of sparks that chase the numbness away. "Guess that's true. So you want to hear --"

"Everything that happened -- with the dragon, in the alley, about the Black Thorn, about the riots -- yes."

And Buffy nods, puts her hand on the bedside -- close enough that she could touch his if she only shifted an inch -- and begins to talk.


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[info]vylit
2005-12-15 02:07 pm UTC (link)
I didn't think the Sam part was plausible, but I like what we got from it. I'm also kind of biased in that I like the fact that Atlantis is cut-off and I don't have a need for crossovers with SG-1. From what I gather, though I've never seen SG-1, they're very different shows.

*hums with John and Rodney love*

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 02:17 pm UTC (link)
I didn't think the Sam part was plausible, but I like what we got from it.

Yep, that works for me.

I like the fact that Atlantis is cut-off and I don't have a need for crossovers with SG-1.

Absolutely!! It's a such a shiny self-contained universe, and goshdarn, I like it that way.

From what I gather, though I've never seen SG-1, they're very different shows.

To say the least. *cough* I've been forced to watch snippets of maybe, all in all, three eps or so in various places from Germany to the US, and never liked anything about them -- not the acting, not the plot, not the characters. (And you know me, I'm not exactly a tough viewer.)

::hums along with you::

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[info]whichwitch666
2005-12-15 03:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I liked that little fic thing! Glad to hear Buffy came through for the team :) And yey for the bad metaphor :)

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 03:43 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Is the voice recognisable, then? & :-)

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[info]whichwitch666
2005-12-15 04:01 pm UTC (link)
Oh, well, that's a good question. I think i knew it was Gunn by doing an elimination process: who was in that alley and was human? - Gunn. So it wasn't his voice i relied on.
And i didn't guess it was Buffy, so i guess it wasn't her voice either that tipped me off...
After i knew they were them, their voices were great, but i can't tell you that the voices were so recognizable that i immediately thought: Ohhh... Gunn and Buffy!

/Constructive criticism

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 04:04 pm UTC (link)
Hey, cool! I knew there was little chance I'd manage a spot-on Gunn, but Buffy; I used to be better with her. Hmm. Must ponder.

Thank you. & :-)

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[info]deepad
2005-12-15 05:41 pm UTC (link)
yeah, i wasn't sure whether it was Gunn or Wesley either, though the riots comment made me tip towards the former. And then as soon as I got it was blonde Buffy, I thought the formality of his interaction would make it Gunn, since Wesley has a History with her.
But 'not-so-ex'..? are you throwing us B/A ers a little cookie?
nice!
::hug::

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 05:51 pm UTC (link)
But Wesley's...you know. ::cries a little::

though the riots comment made me tip towards the former

Hah! Very good. Exactly.

I thought the formality of his interaction would make it Gunn, since Wesley has a History with her.

Yup, exactly.

But 'not-so-ex'..? are you throwing us B/A ers a little cookie?

*g* I am as surprised as you are. But, yes.

And thank you! How are you?? Haven't been messenger-y lately; how's life??

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[info]darcydodo
2005-12-15 06:31 pm UTC (link)
I did figure out it was Gunn, again mostly by process-of-elimination. (But I was also sitting here going, "I think it's Gunn, but was someone else alive? 'Cause I still think it's probably Gunn.") Of course, if you'd tossed a little Gilbert & Sullivan reference in somewhere, it would've been much easier... ;)

I didn't figure out that it was Buffy, though if the "really, really bad metaphors" line had come before, it might have been clearer. Not because of the reference, just because that line's quite Buffy-ish.

Of course, since you identify her as Buffy within the story, it's only us needing to identify him as being Gunn that's really important.

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 06:38 pm UTC (link)
That is so very true. Hey, wanna beta and add that line of G&S you speak of? I couldn't add one since I don't know one. *eg*

I didn't figure out that it was Buffy, though

Yeah, and that means it's a weak voice. Goes to show I can't just toss out fic and expect it to be good, I guess -- I'm spoiled by the company here, but it's not too unusual -- if you aren't Anna S. or Barb C. or...damn, the majority of my friendslist. & ;-)

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[info]darcydodo
2005-12-15 06:53 pm UTC (link)
Hey, wanna beta and add that line of G&S you speak of? I couldn't add one since I don't know one.

Well, if you tell me where you think one would fit and what sort of idea you'd like it to have, I'll see what I can come up with. ;)

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-15 06:56 pm UTC (link)
Oh, anywhere!! Just, if you re-read, is there a moment that strikes you as fitting?

::needs a Gunn icon, pronto::

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[info]amerella
2005-12-15 06:56 pm UTC (link)
Nice ficcage! I like how the last line kind of flows into the rest of their lives, if you know what I mean.

where did all the soap come from?

I KNOW. Hopefully they will kill that storyline as quickly as possible. Aw, and I would have liked to have read any Veronica/Meg you wrote too. ::sad::

Could Logan have been any stranger and stupider with the videos there?

Yeah, man, that was the stupidest thing he's ever done, in a long line of stupid things. It was such an emotionally-charged act of stupidity, though, and so Logan, that it somehow made me love him all the more. How did that happen? I am such a bitch for that kid.

Did you miss Wallace as much as I did? (Did Veronica?)

SHE BETTER HAVE. ;)

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-16 10:23 am UTC (link)
Nice ficcage! I like how the last line kind of flows into the rest of their lives, if you know what I mean.

Hee. I do believe so.

I KNOW. Hopefully they will kill that storyline as quickly as possible.

Seriously. Double-you-tee-eff?!111!!

Aw, and I would have liked to have read any Veronica/Meg you wrote too. ::sad::

Thank you! I might still do it, in the new year or so... ::starts shuffling around scenarios in her head::

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[info]viciouswishes
2005-12-15 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Thanks again for the birthday ficlet.

The Duncan plotline is bothering me as well. RT is hinting at too many things. I do think that it was foreshadowed enough that Meg was preggos. I am, however, upset at killing off more potential female characters. Of course, I was completely Veronica in high school with my gang of guys. But still I had one or two close female friends.

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-16 10:26 am UTC (link)
You're welcome! As I said, it's just a teeny-tiny thing, but you've been such a lovely friend over the years that I had to give it a try for you. & :-)

The Duncan plotline is bothering me as well.

::shakes head sadly:: Yup.

I am, however, upset at killing off more potential female characters.

Same here -- and one of the interesting, cool ones, of the 09er kind but still the light-side-of-the-force type, you know? Grr. Argh.

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[info]skylee
2005-12-16 07:25 am UTC (link)
where did all the soap come from?

::nods sadly:: And Veronica just accepts and forgives Duncan like that? Huh? Why? Meg being pregnant doesn't concern the two of us? Huh? What?

They better get rid of the baby storyline fast.

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[info]monanotlisa
2005-12-16 10:27 am UTC (link)
Totally not a fan of the baby storyline either. I'm sure RT wants to give it an all-new, really quirky! spin, but even so far, it's stretching credibility...and that's putting it mildly.

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